lunes, 21 de marzo de 2016

Holidays

My holidays this years were phenomenal.Frist part i work washing dishes after in the second part of my holiday i travel for two countrys, Perú and Bolivia. Are so beautiful. In peru I know Arequipa and Cuzo, in Arequipa i went to the Colca valley and in Cuzco i went to Machu Picchu, beautiful places. In bolivia I was on the island of the sun, in the isla the people talk Aymara. I diped in the Titicaca lake. I was in tropical climates, is so heat.
I was with capuchin monkeys. This holiday will be unforgettable.

2 comentarios:

  1. Hi Su! your vacation was so entertaining :), I would like to know Perú, I love tropical climates jejeje

    Regards Su

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  2. Susan,

    WC: 96. You were requested to write 200, please, make sure you stick to the instructions next time. I would have liked to read more about these places. Your text is not well edited. Please, pay attention to:

    My holidays this year(s)
    …FIRST (Frist) part???( i) I workED washing dishes after THAT, in the second part of my holiday (i) I travelLED ( for) IN two countrIES(ys), Perú and Bolivia.

    …THEY Are so beautiful. In P(p)eru I knE(o)w Arequipa and CuzCo,

    … in Arequipa (i) I went to the Colca valley and in Cuzco (i) I went to

    …In B(b)olivia I was on the island of the sun, in the islaND (the) people talk Aymara. I PLUNGED, DIVED (diped) in the Titicaca lake. IT was (in) tropical climates, (is so heat???).

    Cheers,

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